Tuesday, 29 March 2011

Contents page 5th draft

In this attempt the amendments I have made are that all the pictures on the left hand side of the page they are also tilted slightly from different corners. I have also added black lines between each subheading these help to divide up the sup heading making them more easily accessible.
To further develop my contest page I will need to find a male artist to put in the contents page as at the moment my magazine is neglecting the male target audience. However it can be argued that males are enticed to buy the magazine as the women will appeal to them.

Contents page 4th draft

I this draft I have changed the layout as the pictures are mainly on the left now unlike previously where they were on the right also I have removed the image of the guy and girl together and replace it with another picture of a girl stuck in a painting.


Monday, 28 March 2011

Contents page 3rd draft



Here I have again altered the layout to make it more easily accessible an editorial has also been added along with a smaller version of my front cover followed by more images.
To improve I would edit the images more by adding effects and correct any spelling or grammatical errors .

Contents page 2nd draft

In this draft I have altered the layout from the previous draft, I have also written up some more copy with page number. There are also more pictures now.
To improve I could write an editorial and include a small picture of my front cover, also I could change the background as it is very overpowering at the moment, perhaps the backgrounds could be the same as the front covers background as it will show consistency through the magazine.

Contents page 1st draft



In this draft I have established a layout and suggested spaces for images to be placed I have also started to write some of the copy.
To improve draft I will consider changing the background colour and begin to collect images to fill up the empty gaps, I should also finish writing up the copy along with page numbers.

Production log


Having now completed my front cover I will begin with my content and double page spread. During this week I have given in my first draft article, made corrections and it has not been re-submitted for my teacher to have a finial check. The difficulties I had faced when constructing my front cover was taking the write image, and because of this i had to take so many pictures, as many images did not suit, whereas other were blurry. I plan to take this on board when constructing my contents page and double page spread.

Final Front Cover